The Harlot Street Facing the street
She stood –
A woman in red
In the first floor
Of the old haveli
Eyes set afar
For the lover who
Left her there
Few weeks ago
The evening sky
Murky and dark
She looks in angst
Her eyes – drowsy
Holding sleep of
A few nights past
In the dim
Street lights
Harlots squabbled
With each other
Near the man – a tall
Guy in a grey suit
And a briefcase…
She has seen him
For a few days now,
On his way home
He would visit
The street, hauntingly
Dreary and empty
Just to spare a sum
To the harlots – who
Lost their charm
Men from the town have
Stopped visiting the street
The old woman told her
Now it’s only the politicians
And police – “Damn!
They never pay” she snarls,
Some from government
And NGOs make their
Rounds –once a while
And then gone forever
The old woman – a
Charmer still
Told her of the times
When they all had
A full night’s fling and
A purse full – and then
She stood –
A woman in red
In the first floor
Of the old haveli
Eyes set afar
For the lover who
Left her there
Few weeks ago
The evening sky
Murky and dark
She looks in angst
Her eyes – drowsy
Holding sleep of
A few nights past
In the dim
Street lights
Harlots squabbled
With each other
Near the man – a tall
Guy in a grey suit
And a briefcase…
She has seen him
For a few days now,
On his way home
He would visit
The street, hauntingly
Dreary and empty
Just to spare a sum
To the harlots – who
Lost their charm
Men from the town have
Stopped visiting the street
The old woman told her
Now it’s only the politicians
And police – “Damn!
They never pay” she snarls,
Some from government
And NGOs make their
Rounds –once a while
And then gone forever
The old woman – a
Charmer still
Told her of the times
When they all had
A full night’s fling and
A purse full – and then
Their choicest red sarees
Colourful glass bangles
Red, blue, yellow and green
Purple lipstick, bindi
And a cream and talc
To cover their
Wrinkling skin…
Listening to the
Chatter of women
Crossing the alley
She stood there--
Colourful glass bangles
Red, blue, yellow and green
Purple lipstick, bindi
And a cream and talc
To cover their
Wrinkling skin…
Listening to the
Chatter of women
Crossing the alley
She stood there--
Lost in thoughts
Of those days
When her lover
Would meet her
By the river side
With black glass
Bangles for her…
When her lover
Would meet her
By the river side
With black glass
Bangles for her…
Photo: As per original copyright at
http://www.doganart.com/asumaneuropan.htm
http://www.doganart.com/asumaneuropan.htm


74 comments:
A very vivid description! Well composed! I wasn't able to visit earlier.....the past week and this one have been maddening!
Dear Rak,
Thank you so much for coming,
I was thinking about you --left a message there..But then I thought --
This was a fast write Rak -- I don't really bother how its. And am not feeling too well for a redo -- feeling very feverish :)
wishes,
devika
Longingness can be very deep and will be lost in thoughts. Nicely written.
Haunting words of a reality few of us know, well done Dev, and the photo or painting image is magnificent, where did you find it?
Beautifully and realistically descriptive; poignantly so!
Well written and imagine there world is something peculiar! This painting nearly portraits the scene!
My wishes dear :)
Hi Priya,
My dear friend, do you realise what you are saying??
A fated-harlot's "longingness" for her lover who left her in the brothel for a commission!!
When would you understand a bit of life, my priya poetess :))
anyway --
thanks for coming and the comment..
wishes,
devija
Hi Lorraine,
Yet to see the other side of life, my dear one
Okay, then know it atleast now :)
But I hope you agree words are more deep than they sound...and powerful when they are true
painting --- searched the google and the site is given in the photocopyright
wishes,
devika
Hi Usha,
Thank you for the comment, dear friend...
Realism -- is based on the reality we "see" in this world.
And for one -- reality is what one makes for one self...I have begun to see poetry separating from life.
anyway, thanks again
wishes,
devika
Hi Jeevan,
Thanks dear for coming and the kind comment...
Their world is peculiar because we are so separated and comfortably insulated in our own world, Jeevan...
Harlots -- some trade flesh for money, some for pleasure to pass time...some just fated to be there...
anyway, its good to know life in all its perspectives..the ups and downs it takes :)
wishes,
devika
Excellent Devika, very descriptive and powerfully visual. Thanks for passing by my blog, re your comment on Cheek to Cheek, it is a poem inspired by a war-zone, more specifically by the usual "oasis" of a hotel where all foreign observers (journalists, Red Cross, NGO people) gather/live during conflict, exposed, yet protected and apart from the reality of war. The long hours spent in wait, drinking and escaping the horrors of the day at the hotel's piano bar.
Hi Beatrice,
Thanks so much for coming and the kind comment...
Now I get it, thanks Beatrice, and reading it now..I can visualise and appreciate it more...it has the mood wonderfully captured :)
I see you posting so less, looking forward for more...
thanks again,
wishes,
devika
Poignant & very well written.
Margie
your description of sound and color brought this to life:-)
Hi Margie,
Thanks for coming and the comment, dear
wishes,
devika
Hi Janet,
Thank you for coming for that fine comment, dear
And Yes Janet, wrt to response to my comment there:
I begin to understand the power of blogging ---especially when i seperate poetry from my life...
I may have to start a seperate poetry blog -- because this blog is supposed to be talking of 'certain aspects' of my life...
And such a poem here would call for unwanted readings by my friends and family --
errr..But they know me well by now :))
Doesn't make much of difference, anyway
wishes,
devika
Your writing here brings the scene to life, both visually and emotionally, very touching...
It is true, as Priya's comment seemed to be saying, that often a woman's longing for love does not change due to the circumstances--so many are still hanging on to promises of love by the men who sell them into the business.
wow, devika, your words hae painted a powerful and poignant sketch from a life few of us are familiar with.
Very well written.I could almost see the street and the women standing around in their red sarees and colorful bangles.Sometimes we wait and wait for the lost love which never returns.How long should one wait....forever.
Hi Firebird,
Thank you for coming and the comment, dear
I am so happy that you could visualise it and that it touched you....such scenes touch me deep..
But then those rich ones who sell themselves pitifully in the street...what do we say!!
"so many are still hanging on to promises of love by the men who sell them into the business."
If I place myself --
A broken promise of love is okay -- but selling to business, I will be waiting for the man to stab him :))
thanks dear
wishes,
devika
Hi Polona,
Yeah, its a life scene perhaps specific to India and some developing nations ---We have very serious art movies related to their life...My poem is inspired by some of those movies...
Ofcourse -- in the developed nations -- its all so out in the open...I wouldn't know if there are such "streets" there..
thanks Polona, and am happy that you liked it :)
wishes,
devika
Hi Starry,
Thank you so much for the comment...and I am glad you could visualise the scene through my poem...
"Sometimes we wait and wait for the lost love which never returns."
I have known that in my life...almost 12 years of my life I have waited for a lost love...until finally he asked me to "Get married" (of course to some other)...
and even then I waited because I was not interested in marriage by then...
until finally my husband, a colleague of mine convinced me of the folly of believing a man's love and all those aspects that go with it....
and finally we got married. its 9 years now...and I am touching 41 this march :)
wishes,
devika
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i really dint get u by the comment ...am not mature enough...and wat type of happiness u talking that i should not go ...:(...i really dint get u sissy :(..
urs..hemu..
What "type" of "happiness" were you seeking in a Harlot Street, my dear brother :))
You seem a very eligible young bachelor-- atleast to me...
& those women can leave you bankrupt ---other aspects -- I am not going into. hope you get that now :)
devika
I love this vibrant painting and the poetry, how are you? It's been a while
Hi Cathy,
I was just at yours..seeing you at Get Zapped's...
I reach others through follow up comments or through links elsewhere...and have been missing you for a while now...
I am fine, dear ..I read you were busy with painting..
look forward to see a few :)
wishes,
devika
Oh Cathy, forgot..
Thank you for the comment on the poem and painting..
painting ofcourse is not mine :)
devika
O M G
did u say Harlot?
isnt she a whore?
Whom are you talking about, Jimmy...
Please leave me and my blogs, my dear friend..
NOW, PERHAPS I NEED TO DELETE ALL FURTHER COMMENTS BY YOU...NO MATTER WHAT...
Best wishes,
devika
just wanna say U got yourself a nice hubby
Janice used to blog secretly after she gott married
she was not cot
she died
and your hubby is a lucky guy
never a dull moment with u
Shut up, will you dear friend??
DEVIKA
A FURTHER BAD REMARK ABOUT ANYONE HERE...ME OR ANYONE
JIMMY, I WILL STOP BLOGGING --
AND THE REASON WOULD BE "YOU" AND "YOU" ALONE! :)
devika
Indeed a brilliant poem...simple yet poignant. But Devika what about your own poems ?
Hi Deepak,
Thank you so much my dear friend :)
My own poems -- I don't "think" I will be writing anymore, Deepak..
Have "played" enough and more with my life. :)
But again, can't say -- most of the poetry here were written out of need, not a habit or practice as much, though..
And if need arises -- I might write my life-based poetry again..I am not sure...
thanks again Deepak,
wishes
devika
A vivid portrait of people, place, and situation.
Hi Bill,
Thanks again for the perceptive comment,
wishes,
devika
this particular snap reminded me of a similar sketch that i had made...
Hi Rakesh,
Thanks for coming dear
Yeah -- in those first days I have seen some sketches at your blog..
Post some sketches Rakesh :)
wishes,
devika
Very nice Devika. So well written. I did enjoy this.
Hi Wandi,
Thank you so much for coming and the kind words, dear
its been a while I came that way..just there now :)
wishes,
devika
good 1! loved the 2nd stanza a lot..
gr8 blog u ve!
Hi Matangi,
Thanks for reaching out..
Nice to know you liked it and the blog..
wishes,
devika
I agree it is a vivid description! of another world far away
I love you vivid description. One can feel and imagine ... The evening sky ... Murky and dark
I agree the painting is very apt for the words.
Thank you for your visit over to me. hugs for you
Hi Nick,
Thank you for coming and the kind comment,
wishes,
devika
Hi @ Trinity Star,
Thank you for coming and the comment.
wishes,
devika
Hi @ Anonymous
I don't reply to anonymous people...
SO YOUR COMMENT IS REJECTED...
wishes,
devika
if dat Annony mouse was talking about Doris
its me
THEN YOUR FURTHER COMMENTS WILL BE REJECTED, JIMMY...
IF ITS NON-SENSE
Wishes,
devika
JIMMY -- REJECTED ONCE FOR ALL!
DEVIKA
your poetry is sanitized
speak the lang of the masses
not intellectuals
There you talk sense Jimmy...
All the ones who read it here, understood...Many who have not commnented have also said -- they understood it...
I think that form a good mass, But I'll keep your advice in mind. :)
Wishes,
devika
PS: Talk of relevant topics here, it will be published.
Munnabhai popularized Gandhiji for the masses
I have a disdain for intellectual talk
Jesus spoke the lang of the masses
he did not use Shakespearan English
He spoke the lang of the fishermen
I understand what you said, Jimmy
and I said -- I will keep it in mind...But when I write poetry words are not very consciously chosen by me....so I can only say, I will try...
Btw, -- To learn that Munnabhai popularised Gandhiji for the Indian masses -- was a news to me..really!
Such is the state of our country...and YOU AND ME are a reason too??
wishes,
devika
No matter what they tell u
no matter what they say
what we believe is TRUE
and I will pray for your CHANGE
and I am hoping that u become a celebrity soon
in India
not the WEST
no matter if the sun dont shine
no matter if the skies are grey now
dont be afraid of the F-word
its not WORDS that is important
its COMMUNICATION
Jimmy khush hua
(use more Hindi in your English)
Mein uthni khush nahin,
Jimmy...But thanks :)
i published this to say, I am not very fluent in Hindi..But again, will try...
The blog is English; in comments -- i will try to use Hindi to those who speak to me in Hindi...
devika
more than poetry and verse
music relaxes me
for lyrics
I adore Bob Dylan
fine, nice to know..
i too like his music. :)
wishes,
devika
hihihi
u r doing fine
Bye
Adios
Jaye Ramji ki
Salaam Malaikum
Deo Bore distheus
the last is Konkani
my Goan mother tongue
:)
bye
Jay Ramji ki..
Poyi Varu -- in malayalam
(in Malayalam it means -- Go and come back...no saying bye, unless is a forever -- that is "vida parayunnu" :))
devika
promise me u will not say "vida parayunnu" (as Keshi did)
no matter what
haha
You want to say all non-sense and want me to promise also...
okay -- I will not :)
but, please for heavens sake don't make such comments here..It upsets me.
anyway,
wishes,
devika
Devika,
nice poem - reality is something that most aren't acquainted with. Makes me sad knowing and remembering what some have to live.
Hi Meena,
Even I am not acquainted with the reality -- as far this poem goes...
It was inspired by some art movies on the topic..
thanks for reading and the comment,
wishes,
devika
My my Devika, so many comments I feel mine might get lost beyond all measure!
Devika said "Their world is peculiar because we are so seperated and comfortably insulated in our own world"...yes this is very true so many are!
However for me being single since my divorce 11 years ago..I have found myself having to live in a lower income bracket therefore have lived in small rented houses on streets where I've seen a lot of "things" going on. Drugs, prostitutes and their pimps..either right next door to me or across the street.
I never had to witness or live in this kind of atmosphere until living on my own all these years. I've had to toughen up in order to survive. Though yes as you stated my life has been hard throughout my life I never had to witness what I've been witnessing these 11 years.
I have now gotten to the point where I know how to handle most situations..though it still scares me some when I do but I don't show any fear..not a good thing to do. I've gotten to know the "other world" that many live in..the world of drugs and the pimp that takes care of them. One street I lived on a few years back..the man that was the pimp across the street..and the prostitutes that lived there with him..it was so strange..the women there would taunt me when I was outside mowing the lawn or doing the yard work I had to do etc..the women would stand across street taking drags on their cigarettes and call me "Bitch" and such..they had no idea who or what I am about..they just didn't like me there..and or whatever I still just do not know..it used to hurt me..then one day the man pimp came outside and he walked over to them and told them to "never bother her again she is a lady of integrity and dignity she is to be respected"..then he looked over at me and nodded and smiled..I noticed from the day I moved across the street from them that he kept his eye out for me in case of any strangers coming near my house or knocking at my door, or parking in front of my house..I would look through the peephole and if I didn't know who was at the door did not answer..that's what you must do. This man that was the pimp would almost always take care of it..he would go over the my yard and tell them to go away or what did they want..etc..he always watched out for me..it was very strange but I just always knew and felt his respect for me.
We never talked or had a conversation just the "knowing" look of respect and watching out for me..yet the women hated me and that hurt me. I felt sorry for them and used to smile at them and they would just make mean faces.
well, this has turned out to be too long of a story and there is much more but I won't go any further. You really just got me thinking about what I observed and have dealt with all these years. The "other side of the tracks" so to speak is where have lived. No one can know until they have witnessed or been "there" or "lived" it..
Great poem I loved it and thank you for sharing...lovely pic also.
Blessings,
Rhi
Hi Rhi,
That was a very consoling comment...not that I am worried, though :)
I am one who learns life from other's life...and art, poetry, movies are all my "study material" -- I approach them quite seriously...
though I joke about them too...I got that habit from my father, i guess..
this poem was inspired by some movies I saw on the subject...and then life around us has images and lessons to offer too :)
thanks for coming, my dear
God Bless,
wishes,
devika
The river flows over rounded boulders of time with marigold petals strewn over. The river does not look back either.
Lovely imagery and idea, Chandni
thanks for coming and the comment :)
wishes,
devika
a very compelling poem, devika. as a number of people have commented, it gives a very powerful insight into a life many of us have not seen.
very glad to have found your site.
best wishes, dalloway
Hi Dalloway,
Thank you so much for coming to read...
I am glad that you liked it,
best wishes,
devika
u step into the soul of the character or the theme, Devika!!
enjoyed this so..its such a refreshing treat amongst the millions of blogs one comes across
u write with pure passion, dont let my compliments or the other 'good' comments here corrupt u :):)
i wanna grow up to be like u - strong n neutral..
Hi Vinnie,
Thank you so much dear friend...
Nothing corrupts me, i hope :)
Grow up like me -- all i can say is, think twice :)
wishes,
devika
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